Emma’s version of a famous story!
Ebenezer was very moody and he hated Xmas and he wouldn’t give a thing to the kids. He wouldn’t even go and have dinner with his family. His family were very angry and sad. The day it was Xmas he sat and done nothing all day. He would sometimes go outside and stop all the kids having fun. The kids were very sad. There was one weird day. There was some big, long ghosts outside off his house and they would start to speak.
All he would say was “Bah Humbug!” That means he was miserable.
Can you spot anything different about Emma’s work?
Ross Mannell said,
December 14, 2011 @ 12:37 pm
Well done, Emma.
Well, in your version it seems Ebenezer is doomed not to learn to care about others. For him life is a humbug. In the end, we would wonder, would anyone care when Ebenezer, like Marley, was gone.
Ross Mannell (teacher)
NSW, Australia
Venus's Mom said,
December 14, 2011 @ 7:06 pm
These things that you pupils do at Bearwood is so amazing i never thought you could do something like this it’s over the hedge. And the letter you haven’t used is the letter C.
Venus's Mom said,
December 14, 2011 @ 7:07 pm
These things that you pupils do at Bearwood is so amazing i never thought you could do something like this it’s over the hedge. And the letter you haven’t used is the letter C . well done Emma
Sumayyah said,
December 14, 2011 @ 7:21 pm
Wow i can’t believe it Mr Mannell all the way from australia has actually visited our blog!
But i love your answers and we know the answers because we are the ones who wrote
It but great explanations though but have another think sir!
Luisa said,
December 15, 2011 @ 10:51 am
Emma this is brill you have described Ebenezer scrooge really well if i was scrooge I would start to apreciate X- mas more
Dylan.J said,
December 15, 2011 @ 4:13 pm
I’m not sure xmas is a real word, but other than that it’s good.
pritpal said,
December 18, 2011 @ 6:39 pm
Well Emma you have done good on this mini paragraph
Well done
elliott said,
January 9, 2012 @ 12:14 pm
there is no letter C
elliott said,
January 9, 2012 @ 12:15 pm
Why dont you try with a different letter like. S
summer said,
January 9, 2012 @ 12:18 pm
it’s a really good letter but i can tell there is no letter C.